Terminal
Standing at the
terminal numbered two
I looked outside from
my queue
And questioned myself
Why is departure always
painful?
I recalled how exactly
ten days back
I returned to home from
work
I was excited beyond
explanation
I was sure about the
reason.
I started
philosophising life
As its phases are like these
terminals
Which may excite or
sadden us
Depending upon their
arrival or departure.
Here came the bus to
board passengers
After collecting my
tickets
I bid an adieu to the place
Which brought me up as
a child.
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©Swati Sarangi
08.10.2017
Very beautifully you penned down to explain the departure scene standing on the terminal. Like your expressive way of writing.
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DeleteArrivals are welcome and departures are painful especially from the place that holds sweet memories.
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DeleteAirports are a great place for emotions. Nicely done with the poem and the analogy with life
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DeleteThe feeling and emotion of leaving your native place is beautifully expressed in this poem.
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DeleteTrue, departures are always painful - be they from a cherished place, or about a person leaving your life and moving on!
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DeleteDepartures are always hard. I feel this way each time I visit Mumbai
ReplyDeleteRight! I agree. It has been years since I left my home but every time I depart, I depart with moist eyes and heavy heart. Thanks for reading it.
DeletePainful truth !!
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