Introduction
Few lines
of my introduction
With
selected words of expression
A
difficult task to perform
I begin
writing
With a
sense of introspection.
I’m not a
celestial body
As my
name suggests
I’m
highly obsessed
With all
inanimates.
I’m into
something
I’ve
never known
The works
of my passion
Are never
done.
I’m just
an ordinary
Can be a
part of illusioned scenery
Words, colors and numbers
Constitute my sphere
Without
them, I feel
I can go
nowhere.
I’m
reserved and quiet
And always
want the
Things to
go right
I just
wish to stay under
The vibrancy
of light.
Ambitious
I’m a bit
Like to
sail through those
Numerous Utopian
imageries
Residing
in my mind
Conflicting
the reality.
Overall,
I’m a human
Made up
of flesh and bones
If I be of any help
I’ll be
the happiest person
of Earth,
I tell.
This life
neither easy
Nor so
tough
A battle
to be
Constantly
fought
With a
promise to keep
Miles to
go before I sleep!!
9.06.2014
Swati
Sarangi
What a beautiful poem. A small autobiography! Just want to stay under the vibrancy of life , is a line which sums up your ambition.
ReplyDeleteThanks a lot,Maa'm for going through my poem and for such a lovely comment!! :)
Deletehi Swati! lovely poem about yourself. yes life is a constant battle, good luck with blogging.
ReplyDeleteHello Maa'm, thanks for reading and commenting.. Have a nice day!!:)
DeleteWonderful poem. It reflects your personality completely.I liked the way you composed it within few hours.
ReplyDeleteAnd what can be a better option to express yourself with these poetic lines...........
I just want to say that "Never stop, just move on".........:)
Few correction in your statement, it *DID NOT* take few hours for me to compose this :P.. Thanks for realizing what I wrote :P :P
DeleteOh yes, I got it. You took few seconds to compose......:P
DeleteBut nice one indeed(whether you have composed it within few hours, minutes or seconds),
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There are even lower units like nano, pico seconds.. You've missed them. :P
DeleteLast two lines quoting frost, added a nice touch. Spelling of "quite" should be "quiet"
ReplyDelete"if i be of any help I will be the happiest person of the earth" sounds good n vaguely familiar..
sorry for being the bad guy over here as I pointed out a mistake.. ;)
I welcome any kind of suggestion of readers for improvement.. Your points have been well noted!! Thanks for reading my poem!! :)
ReplyDeletebut then that is life.. it will be boring if there are no battles or ups and downs.. all the best with everything ..
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Yes, you are true about the struggle in life.. Thanks for reading and dropping a comment!! :)
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