Theme: It’s a
fact that there is no clear cut evidences on existence of GOD but we all
believe in different forms. Even though we’ve never visualized GOD directly yet
we manifest him in our day to day life. This poem is a representation of my
feelings about GOD. Who are the GODS in my life and what do they mean to me?
This poem throws some light upon some of the questions put up above.
The most
pertinent question arises
Shaking every
portion of my belief,
Resembling
the tremor evolved by an earth quake
And
separating the tectonic plates.
The crevice
is quite permanent
Formed out of
confusions,
Prejudices
and misinterpretations
On something
non-existent.
My creators-
Dummy GODS
Are my
saviors
In the land
full of danger
Insecurities
emanating fear.
My mother-a
pious figure,
Taking care
of even the minute need
Each day and
every hour
For novice
survivors.
My father- a
role model
For me,
standing upright
By my side in
the odd hours
Of darkest
turmoil.
My
teachers-concrete support,
Believing in
me
And accepting
me what I am
In my realm.
My sister- a
sweet harbinger
Of noble
thoughts,
Always
reminding of my worth
During fate’s
ugly wrath.
My relatives
are always there
For me to
shower
Their
unadulterated emotions
Filled with
unconditional love and care.
My friends –
parts and parcels
Of tiny world
where
I live and
dream
P.S- I
dedicate this poem whole heartedly to all those who have been a part of my
existence and without whom I can never claim to stand for my values and rights.
In a nutshell, the presented poem is an indication of my deepest gratitude for
“DUMMY GODS” of my life.
06.08.2013
By Swati
Sarangi
The poem which comes from the heart always touches the heart. You have shown your gratitude to whom are on your side. But the creation is above the boundaries of eyesight. Always keep faith on Him. You will get the energy of positiveness when there is a cloud of negativeness around us.
ReplyDeleteAlways see beyond boundary where exits the entire source of energy. Utilize your vision to realize it.
God bless you.
Bapa
Thanks a lot, Bapa. Words of appreciation act as catalyst in the process of recreation for an artist. I'm just a beginner and there is a lot to do and even a lot more distance to cover with my tiny feet(inexperienced feet).
DeleteI always long to get a feedback from you for my work because i know that your words are pure critics for me. You are the first critic from whom I would always like to get a feedback.
These works are the result of your inspiration and your literary skills.
A billion thanks for always inspiring and motivating me. :)
This is a nice concept, emanating the power of the divine through you're love ones.
ReplyDeleteYou are right though abut the description of a higher power.
I was asked define God... I said I cannot externalise such a essence, but let the power live internally.
I said more but that was the overall perspective or that convo would have went on forever.
Speak to you soon "Silent watcher Hornet" bzzzzzzzz
Thanks a lot for appreciating my work..It will boost up my spirit to create more and more..
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